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In Silent Keep . . . |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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In Silent Keep ... ~*Marge Tindal*~  She spoke not again, this silent friend yet I hear her voice on the rise of morn Soft breeze sway, brings her my way in whispers on sunlight borne Before the noon, of too soon gone she plays across my heart In silent keep of tears I weep since day of her depart Rewind the day in memories soft-recall of long ago Pausing in a moment of quiet reflection The sound of silence has many miles to go ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Sigh, oh, how tender, how utterly heartbreaking, Marge. The heart speaks and weeps those silent tears..very very gentle smile |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
heartbreaking indeed...very nicely composed... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, So utterly hauntingly sad and beautiful. Ohhhhhhh Margie when you tug on my heartstrings you make me sigh in melodies so sweet. Wonderful writing beloved sister. I love this I really do, into my library with you. (Soft smiles and warm hugs my sister) Love as always Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Logan~ Reaching out ... touching~ *Hugs* CPatHair~ Appreciating greatly your read and reply. MarshaLove~ I know your heart by your *sighs* ... Love ya, sweets !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
The sound of silence has many miles to go ------------------------------ Silence seems to speak volumes...... This is beautiful....... Thank you dear ~*Margie*~ ************************* It's only me.......only me |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
 oh Marge ....... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge, my friend- this is so sweetly beautiful..  another 'tender render' from your pen straight to my heart..  love and hugs to you, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EnchantedMelody~ Softly saying ... thank you. SEA~ Just hugging you, sweetie. Vicky~ I like knowing I'm headed for your heart ! Thanks to each of you for such wonderful replies. Warms the heart of this poetess. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: This is so touching and beautiful! Betty Lou Hebert |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Oh such a heartbreaking read! It's too late at night to be making me cry! It was beautifully written. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marge. I am here. Hugging. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, such a gentle, loving touch you have used to craft this poem...a masterful and touching piece of work.... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am speechless on what to say, but know I in silence keeping this hurt in my heart. A lovely poem of sentiment Marge. ~*~ Tell someone you love them today, as tomorrow may never come ~*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BettyLou~ I am pleased you found it so~ My intend is written from the heart of many~ SmittenKitten~ The night holds many a tear, my friend. Welcome to our circle of friendship. Karilea~ I know, dear one and I feel your hugs always. Balladeer~ Passing along to you, a special hug. Thank you sweetie. Mysteria~ And you know you can always bring the silence of your pain to the hearth of a friend. Shared with a friend ... joy is magnified and sorrow diluted. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Lovely indeed, Marge! I'll add my *sighs* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I knew I would be keeping this one just by the title alone... Margie the way you turn a phrase is poetry in motion... this is classic Marge work... perfect...and in my treasure box... as are you |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ And I will hold your *sighs* within this heart. JanetMarie~ To be treasured within the heart of your recall is honor beyond expectation. *Thank you all for the kindness of your replies. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Beautiful words Marge, skilfully painted on my minds canvas, I enjoyed the picture. Regards, Olias. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well, here I am again ... number 384 to comment. Almost everything's been said by better word crafters than me. ~*~ clock chiming out time you gone before the last mark now time will stand still the memories shall not fade for they echo in my heart ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Marge...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OLIAS~ Am tenderly pleased to know that you felt the brush strokes of my heart. InterLoper~ Softly said, my friend ... even for #384 !  JamesMichael~ Thank you, poet friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Marge This was so very beautiful and written with words from such a lovely heart........Sue Suetang |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Heartbreaking and very well done! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SueTang~ Thank you so very much, dear. SodPossum~ I appreciate the comments so much. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Such a beautiful title... doorway to a tender beauty that touches my heart... Lovely, Marge! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ah Marge--you touch on something strong with such a delicate finger...hugs and love to you sis! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Absolutely beautiful Marge! I can't seem to say enough! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SuthernGal~ Thank you for entering, sweet lady. *Hugs* Martie~ As you well know ... my heart is strong with very delicate edges~ Thank you for the loving hug, sweet sister. *Back at ya'* ETHome~ Perfectly said, my friend. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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