Open Poetry #14 |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Virginia Salter seeking shade I slipped beneath a ‘wilding’ rose one that has escaped pruning and tlc, yet survives in spite there, I am carried away transported almost five decades back back to summer when nine years old to days when, peanut-butter jar in hand, ice-pick perforated lid at the ready, daring beyond belief sneaking, peeking, seeking bumbles and honeys to capture, because we could in our daring to days when hikes across the grasses bore no fear of the unseen for it was met within the outhouse of what lurked beneath the ring to days when to and from school were surely miles more than many and butterfly wings would carry us much farther than any moths coated in pixie dust were magical and grand and gave no worry of tree-bush those bugs would find at hand simple days wondrous days days for capturing of life days when fairy princess dreamed of being prince’s wife ©May 23, 2001 |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This is a very good looking back on a delightful time.... thank you for sharing.... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thanks, Lady, glad you enjoyed and thanks for reading! |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Oh such wonderful memories. ~Sigh~ How fun it would be to have no worries again. Even if only for a day. Thank you for taking us Back VAS! I enjoyed it there. Do you mind if I stay a while? ~Sheri |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
To days of innocence this took me...thank you! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
sigh, talk about being carried away... this one takes all who read back to the magical days of youth and innocence that are stripped from us all too soon. Thank you for a beautiful piece. Michael |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I still do sometimes, hiding under the wild roses when I want to be alone for a while. Never grew out of my childhood there. Love it. Titia |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
"...to the days when fairy Princesses dreamed of being Prince's wife" VAS......with that one line you just me over as a fan of yours for life....this is so wonderful, and makes me remember my childhood dreams!! Thankyou..I needed that so much today!! Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Vas, Wonderful memories We all have a special few... it's so nice to think back TaraB |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I like the journey back this took me on...excellent writing. Poeminister |
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