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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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ok, I'm listening waiting to hear the sound of your voice ok, I'm listening waiting to hear the beat of your heart ok, I'm listening waiting to hear the draw of your breath ok, I'm listening waiting to hear the steps of your soul ok, I'm listening -------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
 Simply something that everyone needs. This is beautiful, Sven Pen! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Sven, This is something we all wait to hear Softly romantic.. as usual TaraB |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
Hey Sven. I've missed your writing. You always put your feelings into such beautiful, heartfelt words, and this piece is no exception. Love always friend, Krissie I'm the answer to a question no one asked a sleepless dreamer, destroyed by passion ~Angela Pizza [This message has been edited by AniKay83 (edited 06-21-2001).] |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
...beautiful...I have "listened" for way too long...the silence seems deafening!!! Fancy |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
sven- ok...i'm listening...and i like what i'm hearing from your pen... this is simply beautiful.. thanks for sharing it. ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
When you seek, then you will find...gentle smile |
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Julie Jordan Scott Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 146Bakersfield, CA USA |
Hi Sven! Listening is a lost art form for many, many people...and it occurred to me reading your poem that we can, as lovers, listen poetically. This has opened up an ENTIRELY new distinction for me. THANK YOU! Julie |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I am listening the sound of your voice and the echoes too ..... wonderful work, my friend, Sir Sven... Regards, sudhir "I was born intelligent - education ruined me" |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
wonderful words here...always enjoy reading your work... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, listening is one of the greatest gifts to give someone. Love this. Sandra |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
...From your heart, you would listen..... That's the promise you make We do need that......don't we? Thank you for such a touching beautiful read ********************************* It's only me.......only me I hope that would suffice eternally {{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}} [This message has been edited by MyEnchanted_Melody (edited 06-22-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Temptress, thank you. . . and yes, we all do need it. . . rp, thank you for reading my friend. . . Krissie, so good to see you back!! Thanks for reading, glad that you enjoyed. . . Fancy, then perhaps you need to let someone else listen for a while. . .thank you. . . vicky, thank you. . . glad that you're listning. . . Logan, I hope that you're right my friend. . .thank you. . . Julie, I am so glad that I can open up new things for you. . . that really makes it all worthwhile. . . thank you!!! Sudhir, thank you my friend. . . Capt Hair, thank you for reading, I too, enjoy reading you as well. . . Sandra, yes it is. . . let's hope that we can give more of it soon. . . Enchanted Melody, we do need to do this, it's just that some of us learn too late. . . thank you. . . ------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~How truly important, your words, how rewarding they are and will be. Very nice you. *Peace. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Something the rest of us don't do well or often enough, listen! Cor |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
nice pacing o yuh lissening gig! o yuh |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Listening to your words....and hearing them......wonderful the sounds Sven. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
SpitFire, thank you. . . you're right, there are plenty of rewards to be had. . . Corinne, could you imagine if we did??  thank you. . . walt, thanks man!!! GS, glad that you like the sound of this one. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I like this....it's a lovely poem with a nice flow.....good work! Nathan |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful Sven ... the flow comes across as light as the whispered sentiments ... beautiful indeed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
you even listen for the whispers |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
cool!! your simple musings are most effective at tugging my heartstrings....  |
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