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Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2001-06-21 07:15 PM

Eyes so Pure

Through the picture of the mind
The dimensions of thoughts
Are travelling far beyond
A world of imagination

Where no one dared before
Where questions surmounts
Until the dawn of answers
Emerge from the opposite

Eyes so pure, eyes so beautiful
Hurt from my anguish, my pain
Through these eyes I noticed
A friend. No! not just a friend

A deep emotional bond landed
Into my heart from the heavens
A search for truth touched my soul
The coming together of two streams
Streams of tears from the same source
From the same motherland

The pain I saw in those eyes
Entered my soul tearing me apart
Holding back from an embrace
Gathering my senses, I did not want to part

Those tearful eyes, eyes so pure
Reached deep within my soul
I walked back to my little corner
I knew she would reach out to me
For those eyes so full of purity
Became entrenched in my memory
The other end of the rainbow
Had found a friend to ease the sorrow

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-06-21 07:19 PM

DJD~

this is amazing

beautifully done!

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-06-21 07:19 PM

Oh, Daniel, this is so beautiful!

"This rose has seen red, I have been blue
I'm going to Ireland in 2002!" Kathleen.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-06-23 01:40 PM

Lovely writing...James

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-06-23 04:42 PM

JD~
How very, very beautiful.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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sodpossom
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since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

5 posted 2001-06-23 04:44 PM

Very beautiful and powerful!Nice job!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2001-06-23 04:49 PM

To see all of that through the eyes...is wonderful! Well done!

thecraig
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since 2001-03-11

Posts 223

7 posted 2001-06-24 02:39 AM

Enjoyed the gentleness the poem subject displays though near strong devotion.

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

8 posted 2001-06-24 02:48 AM

Daniel-
how wonderfully beautiful..

hugs,
~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

9 posted 2001-06-24 06:52 AM

"The other end of the rainbow
Had found a friend to ease the sorrow"

Beautifully descriptive Daniel JD ... powerful sentiments tenderly woven, just lovely!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

10 posted 2001-06-25 04:07 PM

beautiful Daniel, as it will be safed in my library.....I haven't words enough to tell how this one touched my heart.
excellent as always my friend.

Charisma

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2001-06-25 05:28 PM

enjoy

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