Open Poetry #14 |
A Lifetime of Healing |
Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
I have walked among stars stealing diamonds to toss into the sea. I have wandered lush green country walking with beauty as my only purpose. Then my country whispered - only our spirits spoke – each with his own voice: you could lean into quiet. My eyes have fallen dim, my mouth is dumb, my ears are deaf. No longer do I teach, although there is much to learn. Each grain of sand has memory and becomes history. Children come to this place knowing nothing, elders leave forgetting all things. This earth requires a lifetime of healing. Graphics: A Lifetime of Healing @ Mary Ann Jones "I am not now that which I have been." |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Julian, I found this poem to be touching, on a spiritual level. It made me contemplate the wisdom of your message. I especially liked the phrase "Children come to this place knowing nothing, elders leave forgetting all things." Nice imagery too. "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Amen. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
This is thought provoking,many truth written here. Great poem! |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Library |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is glorious! "This rose has seen red, I have been blue |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
What a wonderful piece of writing this was and so very powerful were your words. Take care........Sue Suetang |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
remarkable, indeed ... very touching... Regards, sudhir "I was born intelligent - education ruined me" |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Julian~ How ponderous~ 'Each grain of sand has memory and becomes history. Children come to this place knowing nothing, elders leave forgetting all things. This earth requires a lifetime of healing.' Simply put ... stunningly meditative. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Beautifully done, with much insight and respect, thanks Mabe. "Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself." |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
...lean into quiet.... I have a lot to learn from you.... |
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