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Nite Tenderness
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Nite Tenderness |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind 
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Nite Tenderness ~~**~~ The tiles pure white awe in your trace Lit up,flaming candle fragrance Lay in satin your silk body Glowing with touch of tenderness ~~*~~ A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 06-21-2001).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
your words have a soft glow tonight...very nice ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What Wynter said  Well done. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
very, very smooth |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
bslicker, You say so much in few words. Very sensual... I liked it TaraB |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
A very soft glowing Thank you Wynter, Thanks for reading Interoper and my above reply Thank you very much Balladeer Thanks Rosepetals Also to anyone that reads this. I don't know if there is a special type of poem but there is only 4 syllabes per line. And 4 verses or something like that, please let me know A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very tender indeed and the softness captured so well... good work! |
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