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Whenever You Are Near
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Whenever You Are Near |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Whenever You Are Near Fear resides in me, bends me to it's wishes some days and no one seems to understand. I risk pain, and sorrow, in the shape of loving, holding onto moments invested, fairytale feedings, walking through clouds in my stroll throughout my garden paradise. I count the petals daily, that fall from the roses, placing them between pages of my life, drying them as keepsakes of your love. Each evening I mist them with moisture kisses, allowing them the nourishment to bring me joy come morning. They deliver to me, a healing, a contentment, a subsiding of fear for the time my eyes can view their beauty. I pause to touch their velvet softness and remember the feel of you, when last we met. You mean more to me than words can say, although I try to leave you with a sense of me to fill your eyes, I never know if I succeed, I never know if you know of the pleasure you bring me, and how the fears release their hold, whenever you are near. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 06-21-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
such tender feeling and vulnerable opening... as usual so well done... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Maureen, you do this so well. I pray for happier times and better, more recent, memories  |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Lovely said! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I've seen your garden, it's as beautiful as your heart! "This rose has seen red, I have been blue |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Such a beautiful picture you painted with your words. Take care.......Sue Suetang |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
'I risk pain, and sorrow, in the shape of loving, holding onto moments invested,' Ahh, Wynter, isn't that the price on loving? To risk the hurts of our soul? I hope your tenderness and feelings are appreciated...gentle smile |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
tenderly written... regards, sudhir "I was born intelligent - education ruined me" |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Fear resides in me, bends me to it's wishes some days and no one seems to understand. I risk pain, and sorrow, in the shape of loving, holding onto moments invested, Just had to comment again... fear resides in ua all at times..and the joys of love are always always...seeded with the risks..... Back to the top with this..too good to not have another round |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Tender write M. Well done. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
"I never know if I succeed, I never know if you know of the pleasure you bring me, and how the fears release their hold, whenever you are near." What a perfect ending to such a lovely poem, Wynter. I much enjoyed. Thank you for sharing this. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Such beautiful words written...brilliant write!! Nathan |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"I risk pain, and sorrow, in the shape of loving, holding onto moments invested, fairytale feedings, walking through clouds in my stroll throughout my garden paradise." Beautiful sentiments and imagery Wynter, very much enjoyed this lovely piece. Best wishes, /Kit |
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