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Lost Sunrises |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Daybreak Before the sun rises Over today’s mountains Of worry and routine When the half light Of realization is just Beginning to fill the Sky with promise You can still see The night’s ghosts As they fade into The never land Of dreams and terror Daybreak… Lost to those that rise late in an effort To hide just a bit longer In the false death of Sleep so they may Search for them selves And illusions of what Might have been… May be… Lost… Just as you Were… to me |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Aha! NOW I know why I don't sleep much... see what I would have lost? |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
excellent work, cpat... regards, sudhir "I was born intelligent - education ruined me" |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
I'm guilty of knowing that second verse well.  I like this a lot. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ain't it amazin' how folks "hide" in bed, afraid to leave for fear of making a mistake or of losing something. If you don't try you can never make a mistake ... neither will you grow. And, what greater waste than that of time or love? Just got a bit wordy here. Sorry, but you cause the words to flow ... yore fault |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Sunshine... you don't sleep much because you are afraid you'll miss that first cup of coffee..( grinning) Thanks for the nice words. sudhir.. Thank you very much for the praise... it is appreciated Illusion... one who sleeps to late can miss the wonderful transition time..but then again..dreams can be very nice to revel in. Interloper... noe don't go blaming me for your loquacious nature showing..( laughing) Being from texas..we kind of expect you to have a LOT to say... everything down there being bigger and all.. ( thanks very much for the comments..they are appreciated) |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Well said, dear Captain, always a pleasure to read your thoughts... *smiles* ~Tier |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
...oh my... what a beautiful scenice route you took me on to get to the destination "point"... Lost... Just as you were... to me ...what a romantic ride... Thank you Fancy |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Cpat this is exquisite! Oooh, I like it soooo much!!! |
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