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. . . beautiful words - senryu
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. . . beautiful words - senryu |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
your beautiful words mainly intended for eyes impinged upon heart Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh wow....this..... wow. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I'll second that ....wow..... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
yes, the words on the page are so capable of touching the heart powerfully! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read  |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Beautiful! ~Tier |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beautful words Interloper... |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
The greatest power of a poem....touching someone's heart. Great work! You touched my heart =) |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
~*~ The Tall Texan pulls his hat lower and hangs his head, to hide the redness creeping into his cheeks, scuffs the toe of his boot in the dust and stammers "Y'all shore do know how to make a feller feel gud." ~*~ Thank you all for your undeserved approbation. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
you say your probation was undeserved???? The beauty of your words seeping into minds eye an oasis in my heart |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
muchly enjoyed... thanks a great deal... regards, sudhir "I was born intelligent - education ruined me" |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
SEA ~ Aw shux Ron ~ Yessir, they should give me life for the way I write Sudhir ~ Thank you my friend. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I agree.. life with a pen..so you can continue to share... I guess that is as opposed to life in the pen... ( chuckling) |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
good write. [This message has been edited by lunatic (edited 06-21-2001).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ron ~ Let me ponder this in my pensive mood lunatic ~ Thanx. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Pensive are we? My friend..other than being a smart ass... nothing was meant by the comment. bad habit I have... being a wise cracker... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ron ~ I took no offense. I feel, while penned up, one should be pensive, knowing one will not become a pendant |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
You guys! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
this one deserves another round of comments.... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
he pens SEA speechless we, gifted, nevertheless of wry wit, confessed |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Lovely writing, Interloper. Much enjoyed. All writing comes |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
So much said in your... beautiful words |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sheesh by the time I got to the bottom and all the interaction I forgot what I was going to say, the words to the beautiful senryu, and all! So for the second trip down, after all that I wanted to tell you how "sweet" that was! Boy you Texans sure know your "stuff"! ~*~ Tell someone you love them today, as tomorrow may never come ~*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ *Marge smiles* B R O A D L Y ! Enjoyed the entire thread ! What fun to be a poet ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
100 % true |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
BrightStar ~ Us? Faterider ~ Many thanx Sunshine ~ Now I'm speechless Lone Wolf ~ Your visits are always appreciated and your comments valued. Walker ~ Yes, I've been told I say too much Mysteria ~ Isn't it fun to read all the comments and watch the gr8 interaction among our "family?" Thanks for the kind comment Marge ~ You said it. And you say it so well Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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