navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #14 » Your Prayer Answered
Open Poetry #14
Post A Reply Post New Topic Your Prayer Answered Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2001-06-20 09:45 PM




An Angel spoke these words to me
in answer to your prayer
A woman waits in your future
a love with her you’ll share

She has the eyes of love
to see inside your soul
She has the ears of kindness
that will hear you halved or whole

Her strength and her gentleness
will compliment your own
Her desire to be with you
are seeds her love have sown

She will accept you, sir,
as the kind loving man you are
she will be your moon
as you will be her star

Her dream is to love only you
she’s waited all her life
to find the man, the poet,
that will take her as his wife.


© Copyright 2001 Poet deVine - All Rights Reserved
Logan
Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641
Arkansas
1 posted 2001-06-20 09:49 PM


Ahh, Poet, what an angel to have around. gentle smile...very nicely done and read
inot2B
Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
2 posted 2001-06-20 09:51 PM


What more could a man ask for!
You will have lots of requests from our single poets wanting you to speak with the "Angel" on their behalf.

Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2001-06-20 09:52 PM


You know, I CAN do that for you all...just ask Jamie!!!  
RSWells
Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533

4 posted 2001-06-20 09:56 PM


Hope, Love, Gentleness and Acceptance.........Well we can dream no?
bslicker
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321
state of mind
5 posted 2001-06-20 10:10 PM


bravo...... bravo
great write.

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

6 posted 2001-06-20 10:30 PM


*smiling at you and your reply*
we dont doubt you  
this is a lovely intend...
and written cleverly with the reverse role perspective.
well done poetess of the divine

she said I dont know why you ever would lie to me
like I'm a little untrusting when I think that the truth is gonna hurt ya
~MB20~

Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
7 posted 2001-06-20 10:45 PM


PoetdeVine~
*smiling here*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

Front Page
New Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 9

8 posted 2001-06-20 10:55 PM


This kind of poetry keeps me going into the night. Thank you.
vlraynes
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
9 posted 2001-06-21 12:25 PM


sharon-
   this is really beautiful..
   could you speak to that angel
   on my behalf? lol  
   thanks for sharing this..

   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Mysteria
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada
10 posted 2001-06-21 02:47 AM


I hope that wasn't the angel that messed up my last request  , if not, can you please put in my order - of course, tall, dark, not necessarily handsome this time (don't feel like sharing!)  Ahhh Sharon this was great!
Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
11 posted 2001-06-21 07:35 AM


This is beautiful, Sharon.  Definately a keeper.  Purely heartfelt and lovely work.
Michael

suthern
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
12 posted 2001-06-25 04:12 PM


Dadblast it, PDV... Men already expect perfection... now you're telling them that an angel is waiting to answer their prayers??? LOL. Humph!!! This flawed woman doesn't stand a chance. *G* (But we already knew that! *G*)

Seriously, deVine one... this is superb!

Fandaen
Junior Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 47
Ft Worth, Texas
13 posted 2001-06-25 04:15 PM


From God the Angel comes down and from God your words flow. Thank you for sharing them.
Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
14 posted 2001-06-25 06:42 PM


Suthern, in MY eyes YOU are that perfect Angel..if he doesn't see it, then he's not good enough for you!  
Sven
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
15 posted 2001-06-25 06:48 PM


I know that she's out there. . . and suthern, there are plenty of other men who believe the same thing. . . they're just waiting for the angel that is you. . . trust me. . .  

you know I love this one deVine. . .

-------------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
16 posted 2001-06-25 06:51 PM


I wish I had an angel to whisper in my ear
I loved this poem
Liz

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #14 » Your Prayer Answered

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary