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Irie
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0 posted 2001-05-23 02:40 AM


Washing over me,
The love pouring from your soul
Filling me, complete

~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"



© Copyright 2001 Sheri - All Rights Reserved
NapalmsConstantlyConfused
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1 posted 2001-05-23 03:37 AM


short and sweet with more punch than it looks like..... kind of a poetic Kamikaze  
-Napalm


I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM!
"Why do i smell something burning?!?"
I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM!

Lady In White
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2 posted 2001-05-23 09:56 AM


This suits me just fine this day...thank you!
VAS
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3 posted 2001-05-23 10:05 AM


Lovely!
Sated in but a few words.

Rain
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4 posted 2001-05-23 10:28 AM


Beautiful and well captured.
Sven
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5 posted 2001-05-23 08:34 PM


great job Sheri. . . you're doing well with these. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Watersign6
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6 posted 2001-06-06 08:41 AM


great write!
Poeminister
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7 posted 2001-06-06 01:30 PM


Beautiful...
Interloper
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8 posted 2001-06-06 01:35 PM


love is all in all
we live and die for our love
we should do no less

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


SEA
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with you
9 posted 2001-06-06 01:42 PM


sweet wave after wave
washes your love over me
cleansing my spirit

~SEA

* beautiful Sheri  

kaile
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10 posted 2001-06-06 11:38 PM


reminds me of sea waves....very lovely image...
Irie
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11 posted 2001-06-19 01:20 PM


WOW,
Many thanks to ALL of you for your comments.
I'm sorry it has taken me so long to respond,
I've been out of town!
I glad you have enjoyed my happiness!  

~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"



Fancy
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12 posted 2001-06-20 06:25 PM


...lovely...this moves me...


lunatic
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13 posted 2001-06-20 06:28 PM


This likes me and I like it
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