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Open Poetry #14

- - -I must taste your lips - - -

lunatic
Member

since 2001-04-20

Posts 172

0 posted 2001-06-20 06:20 PM

moonglow in your eyes
softens my heart and resolve
I must taste your lips

Let thy moon arise. William Blake

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-06-20 06:35 PM

ahhhh..but what a way to go...
resolve and resistance are over-rated LOL
lovely write...well done

she said I dont know why you ever would lie to me
like I'm a little untrusting when I think that the truth is gonna hurt ya
~MB20~

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2001-06-20 06:48 PM

Now I smile again
spark of me in grin and glow
didn't know it showed...

beaming at you from here. Touched my heart!!!

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

3 posted 2001-06-20 06:52 PM

Really, really nice senryu you've written here.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-06-20 07:10 PM

oh yes, now that's passion. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 2001-06-20 07:45 PM

How gentle and loving! I like this.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

6 posted 2001-06-20 07:52 PM

Beautiful!

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

7 posted 2001-06-20 08:35 PM

Wow!

~Tier

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2001-06-21 07:14 AM

Moonglow, sunglow, candleglow, I'm always ready to taste her lips...James

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2001-06-21 10:07 AM

What a way to spend time...well done!

BrightStar
Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 219

10 posted 2001-06-22 11:01 AM

How lovely *sigh*

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