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lunatic
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0 posted 2001-06-20 06:20 PM



moonglow in your eyes
softens my heart and resolve
I must taste your lips

Let thy moon arise.  William Blake

© Copyright 2001 Man in the Moon - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 2001-06-20 06:35 PM


ahhhh..but what a way to go...
resolve and resistance are over-rated LOL
lovely write...well done  

she said I dont know why you ever would lie to me
like I'm a little untrusting when I think that the truth is gonna hurt ya
~MB20~

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2001-06-20 06:48 PM



Now I smile again
spark of me in grin and glow
didn't know it showed...

beaming at you from here. Touched my heart!!!

Titia Geertman
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3 posted 2001-06-20 06:52 PM


Really, really nice senryu you've written here.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

Sven
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4 posted 2001-06-20 07:10 PM


oh yes, now that's passion. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
5 posted 2001-06-20 07:45 PM


How gentle and loving! I like this.  
walker
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6 posted 2001-06-20 07:52 PM


Beautiful!
Tiersdin
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east coast
7 posted 2001-06-20 08:35 PM


Wow!

~Tier

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2001-06-21 07:14 AM


Moonglow, sunglow, candleglow, I'm always ready to taste her lips...James
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
9 posted 2001-06-21 10:07 AM


What a way to spend time...well done!
BrightStar
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10 posted 2001-06-22 11:01 AM


How lovely *sigh*
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