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Open Poetry #14

Emerald Fire

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2001-06-20 06:10 PM

If the cold Emerald
Fire of your eyes
Did burn hot for me
The sea in jealous rage
For the beauty stolen
From her depths
Would swallow
All understanding
And drive again
The madness
within

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-06-20 06:11 PM

Doan you just LOVE inspiration?

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-06-20 06:18 PM

Yep... because of you I actually wrote 4 pieces all to do with Emerald...

Long story... but this was the hardest to write..and it still does not capture the elements I wanted..so perhaps another lies out there as well..

Thanks for the comment and the inspiration

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-06-20 07:20 PM

now this is a great picture. . . I love this. . . mind if I borrow this idea and phrase gentlemen???

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Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-06-20 07:26 PM

It may not have hit the chords you wished, but I find it quite....

lovely....

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

5 posted 2001-06-20 08:47 PM

This was very nice, Captain, very nice indeed...

*smiles*
~Tier

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

6 posted 2001-06-20 08:53 PM

Powerful sentiments Cpat, very nicely done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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