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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2001-06-20 06:10 PM



If the cold Emerald
Fire of your eyes
Did burn hot for me
The sea in jealous rage
For the beauty stolen
From her depths
Would swallow
All understanding
And drive again
The madness
within

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1 posted 2001-06-20 06:11 PM


Doan you just LOVE inspiration?


Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2001-06-20 06:18 PM


Yep... because of you I actually wrote 4 pieces all to do with Emerald...

Long story... but this was the hardest to write..and it still does not capture the elements I wanted..so perhaps another lies out there as well..

Thanks for the comment and the inspiration



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3 posted 2001-06-20 07:20 PM


now this is a great picture. . . I love this. . . mind if I borrow this idea and phrase gentlemen???

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4 posted 2001-06-20 07:26 PM


It may not have hit the chords you wished, but I find it quite....

lovely....

Tiersdin
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5 posted 2001-06-20 08:47 PM


This was very nice, Captain, very nice indeed...

*smiles*
~Tier

Kit McCallum
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6 posted 2001-06-20 08:53 PM


Powerful sentiments Cpat, very nicely done!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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