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And In His Thunder . . .
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And In His Thunder . . . |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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And In His Thunder ... ~*Marge Tindal*~ In lightning-flash of memories I'm feeling the roll of his thunder Reverberations of the last time his heart beat next to mine Electric ... symphony play me again ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Oh my goodness Marge....why do I hear such reverberation....this is wonderful! |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Marge, Play Me Again enjoyed Thanks Connie |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
such an enjoyable read..and so well put together... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Marge...... you're quite the fountain of poetry of all types and stlyes and I love the life you put into all of them! The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
LOVELY WORK MARGE OOOPS IM SURE ITS MORE LIKE PLAYTIME would love to read your memory diary and the smoke is forever....... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Whoa! What a wonderful piece. I felt it in my chest  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Lucky you! Fun isn't it? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyInWhite~ Glad to know you hear it too ! Thank you. Zinsser~ Thank you. CPatHair~ Thanks, I appreciate that ! ETHome~ Tee-Hee ! @'fountain' ... My little heart is all soaked ! ! You know I love sharing a shower !  SoaringEagle~ It IS playtime ! My heart is an open-book, sweetie ! You REALLY want to read all about yourself ?  Always catching your smoke~ InterLoper~ Exactly where it should have landed, sweet poet. Thanks with *hugs* Mysteria~ Oh, yeah .... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
and I am sure the rumbling of the thunder was quite heavy too...gentle smile, well, done, Marge |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, You have captured this perfectly. I can hear the rumble, ohhhhh what a gift you have Margie, this is soooo wonderful    Take care love as always Mushy   Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
this short piece speaks volumes.... May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Logan~ *smiles here* MarshaLove~ You doll ! ! AWhispersCaress~ It rolled like thunder across my heart. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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