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Life Force (about the ocean)
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Life Force (about the ocean) |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Life Force When my world is crazy and sad Is when I seem to miss you so bad In my minds eye I can feel and see How you always center me Your roar and thunderous sound Penetrates my mind and drowns Mindless worries of my life Brings whats important to the light Salty aroma refreshes me Endless sky for me to see Sun flickering off your surface Bringing life, answer and purppose Waves crashing, sandy shores Seagulls flying, shells and more So much power, so much untold Oceans life force for all to behold By Connie McDonald Copyright@2001 March 6, 2001 [This message has been edited by Zinsser (edited 06-19-2001).] |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Ah, now you have me missing the beaches of my childhood.... thank you for this! |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Lady In White, It was my pleasure.. My thanks to you Connie |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ah...I could use a cool ocean breeze right now!!  |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Oh man, how I love the ocean!! And this is a wonderful poem about all the feelings associated with being there...excellent write...I love it! sp  I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Poet De Vine and Snowpants Thank You so very much Connie |
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