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On An Autumn Wind
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On An Autumn Wind |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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On An Autumn Wind ~*Marge Tindal*~ I met you on an autumn wind summoning me across a heathered valley Shy of caress until the gentle breeze of you blew softly through my heart Meet me again on the howling wind When winter comes to lay blanketing white across the night where the wind ever-chilling blows Spring jumps up to greet me in the blossom of your smile Whispering breezes of your name calling me always to your side And should you ever be gone from me I would know you again on the wind that whistles across a meadow when the summer blooms of daffodil ~ Winds encircle me ~ ~through ever-changing seasons of you~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, you sprinkle your poems with such delicious seasoning....  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ 'Bout thyme you showed up ! You are the spice of my night !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
i hereby place you under arrest for malicious use of color in aiding and abetting already wonderful imagery which didn't really need the help :P hehehe great write, marge  -Napalm
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
NCC~ I hereby plead GUILTY - of splashing color upon the winds of the night ! I'll do my time in rhyme ! Tee-Hee-Hee ! A most arresting reply ! I always did look good in stripes ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
~*~ Sigh~*~ beautiful Marge....your words always...   Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Lovely poem, and if you had shaped the stanzas like leaves well then I would be jumping cart wheels...very colorful Marge. I really enjoyed this one. ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Wonderful... Thanks for a delightful read, Marge... Regards, Sudhir |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This sounds absolutely inspired....thank you for this, Marge.... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Whatever the season, love brings beauty to it and makes it special. And whatever the topic, you write it beautifully. *S* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Marge--that suthern girl said what I was going to say. Hugs to you sister of my heart! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ Just caught a little breeze across my heart. Thank you, Lauren. Mysteria~ Cart wheels, hmmmm ? Might have to take that challenge ! Sudhir~ Thank you, sweet friend.  LadyInWhite~ Yes ... each season brings new loving inspiration. Thank you for enjoying it. SuthernGal~ Thank you - I try to write this heart ... Always nice knowing it lands in yours. Martie~ LOL ! Well, she sure did ya' proud ! *Hugs* back at ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"And should you ever be gone from me I would know you again on the wind that whistles across a meadow when the summer blooms of daffodil ~ Winds encircle me ~ ~through ever-changing seasons of you~" You can write such an atmosphere into a poem Marge...God bless you! The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Marge, extremely beautiful and I loved every line in it! I enjoyed it so much. Sauni Sauni :) |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Oh geez, Marge, gentle smile, you know how I am about the breeze and the wind...so very well done, sigh, but as always...gentle smile |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Marge this is really lovely and this the ending,...... "~Winds encircle me ~ ~through ever-changing seasons of you~" Is the icing on the cake Beautiful! Maree |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ Thank you so much for enjoying the atmosphere with me. Saunni~ I appreciate you letting me know you enjoyed it so. Logan~ May gentle breezes blow across your night. Thank you so much. DarkAngel~ Awwwwww ! Thanks for liking the icing ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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