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Perfect Oblivion |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
I’ve fallen asleep atop the mist of security’s breath, indifferently dreaming of the mayhem unbridled below, of which I’ve no longer been apprehensive since of the muffling of your grasp... the lightning reaches...your hand defends; the thunder sneers...your comprehension intensifies... the vagueness distorts...your eyes interpret the clues; the moon hides...your electricity repositions the clouds... I’ve plunged into reverie amidst the threats on my well-being, blithely smiling into the eyes of curses unleashed about, to which I’ve given no consideration because of the deafening of your unspoken assurance... simplicity eludes me...your voice soothes me; the lack of composure unnerves me...your gaze calms me... certainty sidesteps my aim...your guarantee reinstates my faith; the forthcoming remains a mystery...your expertise unravels its fibers... -kh 06/18/01 I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
What a wonderful way to say, "I am safe, I am loved" very nice read...gentle smile |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Perfect Indeed. Enjoyed this. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
the lightning reaches...your hand defends; the thunder sneers...your comprehension intensifies... the vagueness distorts...your eyes interpret the clues; the moon hides...your electricity repositions the clouds... ================================= simplicity eludes me...your voice soothes me; the lack of composure unnerves me...your gaze calms me... certainty sidesteps my aim...your guarantee reinstates my faith; the forthcoming remains a mystery...your expertise unravels its fibers... ================================== DOES HE HAVE A BROTHER???????????? I need some inspiration like this..... very cool write SP...ethereal and elemental imagery combined with the employ of the comparisons of nature and the emotions. this is quite a declaration. Well done poetess blizzard booty  she said I dont know why you ever would lie to me |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is very nice. Much enjoyed. Sandra |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Ahhh...when all is right in our world, what a poetic place to be! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Oh, lucky you. Well done! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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