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Destiny |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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Destiny  You are my destiny... the whisper of my wings, my life is finally whole... choirs of lovebirds sing on the flutter of Venus spell our fate is everclear flown over pearls of heaven found within a tear of an angel gazing down 'pon embracing silhouettes flickering the spark of my soul... rhapsody of pirouette you're the magic of my dreams - the keeper of stars aglow I sail the swift of paradise, sweet soulmate, I need you so, for, you are my destiny... the kiss upon my wings my soul skips with butterflies when your heart softly sings a lullaby blessed with wonder 'neath the smile of pale moonlight, you are my one and only love forevermore in fate's flight  By Melissa P. Monette  |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"on the flutter of Venus spell our fate is everclear" Love this. Wonderful write. PM "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
..."the kiss upon my wings...my soul skips with butterflies when your heart softly sings"...oh my dear....it does not get any better than this.... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey...melissa! sweetly written and beautifully presented!!! Nice work, lovie!  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Melissa- wow..this is absolutely beautiful. i really enjoyed reading this one.. thanks for sharing it.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh,Melissa~ This one just fluttered into my heart~ I LOVE the graphics as a lovely addition to your thoughts ! (But ... you knew I would !) Nice, nice, nice ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you know, if you keep this up, I'm going to run out of words to tell you about how excellent this is. . . wow. . . you're just reaching deep for these aren't you??? It shows. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Beautiful words and emotions with great presentation, this is wonderful work Thank you for sharing. Regards, Olias. |
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Mote Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 31 |
Ah, beautifully done...very, very nice. Mote |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh this tickled my heart, so beautifully done, and the graphics were the icing on your wonderful cake! ~*~ Tell someone you love them today, as tomorrow may never come ~*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Melissa, what a special combination of words, music and pictures. This could truly be a victorian love poem. Sandra |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
flickering the spark of my soul... rhapsody of pirouette you're the magic of my dreams - the keeper of stars aglow I sail the swift of paradise, sweet soulmate, I need you so, for, you are my destiny... the kiss upon my wings my soul skips with butterflies when your heart softly sings =================================== well this is a big ole sigh waiting to happen *S* this is so lovely and romantic Melis...you write what we all dream of.. that pic is just way too cute well done poetess butterbee  |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Many thanks to everyone for your sweet replies~  Well, I suppose I really am in a romantic mood All I seem to want to write lately is love poems, I'll even thank Sven for inspiring me with his romantic verse |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may he always be your destiny and carry you on wings of love to the moon and stars and all your dreas come true! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is enchanting! You have such a beautfiul heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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