Open Poetry #14 |
I Stand Before You |
thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
I stand before you all today But not one eye can see my way My time arrived, to leave this earth A fact so planned, to every birth It happened where I had to go My torch for life was so aglow I transferred while in uniform Protecting freedom, through a storm Should I resent I died for you Not on my life, red white and blue Please help my family through each day Tell all my friends, try not to stray And of the country I did love Do think of me, through God above Your memories, brought forth this day Send love to us, who could not stay |
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joycerogers Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 83Texas |
Poetic Plumber, I truly enjoyed this heart touching read. I have a tender heart for veterans, for I am married to one. You should share this poem with other veterans and the families of those veterans now gone. The flow of the rhyme in this poem, simply floats the heart into the passion of a vet who died bravely for his country without regret. Very, very, well written. Observe the animals and they shall teach you the nature of life in man. Observe the earth and it shall reveal the nature of life in God. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
How very thoughtful...so often we take for granted our freedom never thinking of those who paid the cost of our free ride...thnak you for reminding us that freedom is earned... |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
i, too, am quilty of taking for granted...thanks for the reminder. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Very well done! |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Yes, many of us will have reunions, or simply allow memories to return....it would be wonderful if all who have lost someone, whether through wartime, or other circumstances, go and visit the cemetaries this weekend.... and better yet, seek out those who served our country, and say "Thank you". |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Amen - beautifully said. Michael |
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