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poertyman2002
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since 2001-02-04
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Florida, US

0 posted 2001-06-17 10:34 PM


Sitting in a room all alone, thinking to myself, how does life work, when the sky falls and now i dont care anymore. I look around and realize that the world is not supposed to be explained. You will learn what you need to know.


As I think about love, I look out the winodw. I see a bird singing to me. I see a close friend down the street wave to me. My family leaves the house and I get a phone call from a lost cousin. Now, doesn't that prove that love can drive you crazy?


© Copyright 2001 Brian Gold - All Rights Reserved
Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
1 posted 2001-06-17 11:02 PM


This was a very interesting write, poetryman.  I am betting there is more here than meets the eye.  Not quite sure what that is though.  In time, the lessons will reveal themselves to you.  My advice is to be sure not to miss their meaning for you will need to apply it to your life int he future.  Nice work.

Welcome to Passions!  Hope to see more.  

Lone Wolf

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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