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pres56
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since 2001-06-09
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0 posted 2001-06-17 05:10 PM


The black dogs take many forms such as sadness, despair, distrust and so on.


Eating at my brain
telling me lies
i hate the evil in their eyes
The Black Dogs.

Causing me untold confusion
following my shadow
here today still there tomorrow
The Black Dogs are chasing me.

Drinking my blood
stealing my thoughts
they can never be caught
The Black Dogs.

Hounding me
pounding is my heart
scaring me, tearing me apart
The Black Dogs.

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Mother_Earth
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1 posted 2001-06-17 06:24 PM


pres56, you have given a name to those fears and thoughts that are with alot of us.  Dark feelings but it is better to get them out into this big world.  ME
Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-06-17 06:29 PM


The Hounds of Baskerville DO come to mind!  Good job!
pres56
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3 posted 2001-06-17 07:25 PM


Thank u both, Hope my last poem wasn't to dark.
take care from pres

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