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Open Poetry #14

Conclusion

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-06-17 04:46 PM

I want to disappear when you lie.
I want to reappear when you love me.
Why can you love me constantly?
Why does your love stand on the tracks waiting for a collision?
I cannot pretend not to care,
because I do.
Everytime this happens, it takes years off this love.
This leads to a conclusion,
without solutions just because you can't find your way back to my love, when you get lost.

[This message has been edited by walker (edited 06-17-2001).]

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-06-17 04:57 PM

Conclusion without solutions...maddening ride, excellent write!

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

2 posted 2001-06-17 07:53 PM

Hi Walker,

The power these words express, and yes I loose many a year evertime He lie's, so true the out come, great writing here.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Cuddlez
Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362

3 posted 2001-06-17 08:07 PM

this situation does indeed sound maddening. many thats why it seems so familiar...

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-06-17 10:04 PM

Sounds to me he has no clue what he really wants. If he did, he'd at least be honest with you. Good expression.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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