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Open Poetry #14

Tears of Red

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-06-17 04:18 PM

Tears of Red

my tears bleed
from too much need
why can’t you see
what you do to me
not too strange
nothing will change
and the gifts you gave
that my heart saved
the ones you can’t take back
given from things I lack
you know the ones you use
that we somehow excuse
now they stop
with dreams in pop
a good bye said
in tears of red

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-06-17 04:29 PM

Ouch...a lot of pain emits from your words. Very powerful and emotional write, Helen. Nice work.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

2 posted 2001-06-17 05:13 PM

Tears Of Red
Beautifull..... sorry for your pain... something I understand well......
Thank You for sharing
Connie

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

3 posted 2001-06-17 06:51 PM

Reasons, right or wrong, easy or hard...the heart bleeds. If not, it would be easier to remain still and languish as we wither.

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