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Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
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0 posted 2001-06-17 04:03 PM




To My Love On Fathers Day


Thank You Love for being there
All the days through out the year
Trudging through this Holy mess
Calling it true happiness

The kids all love you and its complete
Thats why they always seem to compete
For your time and energy
Showing you all they are and want to be

I just wanted to to know
My love for you continues to grow
Everytime I hear them say
"I love you Daddy" and you tenderly glance my way

By
Connie McDonald
Copyright@2001
June 17, 2001
   8:40am
  

© Copyright 2001 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
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Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2001-06-17 04:12 PM


Tender and sweet sentiments Connie ... you've painted a lovely picture with your words, much enjoyed!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
2 posted 2001-06-17 04:30 PM


Very beautifully expressed!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641
Calif.
3 posted 2001-06-17 05:08 PM


  Thank You both very much
         Connie

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