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Open Poetry #14

this may make you smile!

Hollowman
Member

since 2001-06-01

Posts 117

0 posted 2001-06-17 03:00 PM

The alarm clock rings right next to my head
it rings so loud it could wake up the dead
I open my eyes and its early morn
I have the IQ of someone freshly born

Shave off my stubble, scratch my thigh
non baby approved shampoo brings a tear to my eye
deodorise the armpits, cologne to the cheek
the pain so extreme, god I feel weak!

Jump in the car, pass wind to be rude
its another day with the office dudes
Computer on, colleagues rant
I'll deal with that itch under my pants

Hussle and hassle, click and buzz
I hunt down my belly button fuzz
Daydreams and donuts, coffee and a shake
its for 5:00pm I can hardly wait

Then its down to the store, a video of sorts
I guess you could call it "LOVE SPORTS"
Bedtime, soft pillow, nice and warm
close my eyes, extra long yawn
ready for sleep, relaxing in bed
Time to set the alarm by my head.

Rich-

ps- this is no reflection on my character -lol

[This message has been edited by Hollowman (edited 06-17-2001).]

Fancy
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 189
TN/USA

1 posted 2001-06-17 06:12 PM

...Rich...
make me smile, indeed you did...you have captured a most typical day with words much better than even a polaroid could....

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

2 posted 2001-06-17 06:14 PM

Hollowman, hope you washed your hands before you ate that donut!! Cute poem and ssssoooo like a man. ME

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-06-17 06:33 PM

Yeah, right. LOL...

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2001-06-17 06:51 PM

lemme guess, you're a police officer? lol

Hollowman
Member

since 2001-06-01

Posts 117

5 posted 2001-06-18 07:00 AM

hehehe...well I am glad I raised a smile or too, they sat its the best medicine! thank you all for you replies!

take care

Rich-

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