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Fancy
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since 2001-06-05
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0 posted 2001-06-17 11:08 AM


A Chance to Take

What a chance I take with my life
opening my heart up to you once again;
the first time you almost destroyed me,
would you just do that again?
What have you learned from these months apart?
Are you getting ready to ask for a fresh start?
If so,
do you know we could never start again
until we put closure on that awlful end;
questions to answer; faith to restore
can you handle all this and more?


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bslicker
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1 posted 2001-06-17 11:15 AM


Wow, nice write.

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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2 posted 2001-06-17 03:33 PM


this is was really a beautiful and
touching poem. one that i could truly
relate to--soft words, take care my
friend...

amy  

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."  


Lone Wolf
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3 posted 2001-06-17 04:41 PM


You never really know, until you take the chance.  Best of luck to you, Fancy.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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