Open Poetry #14 |
To You I'm Just a Dandelion |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
To You I’m Just a Dandelion to the rhythm of If I Were a Butterfly Virginia Salter If I were a clinging vine I’d sing a song to make you mine If I were a climbing rose I’d wind around and please your nose To you I’m just a dandelion in your lush green lawn You’ve no need for me at all I’m just a weed that riles your gall All I see is your backside to save my heart, I let it slide walk away with my head bowed to hide my tears within the crowd To you I’m just some old rag weed someone to spurn, cuz you don’t need anyone to be your friend to stick by you until the end But some day, you’ll surely know being alone’s just gotta go you’ll look around and seek to see someone to care, someone like me Too late’s come and gone by then you’ll sit around and wonder when someone will come to be with you someone that’s sweet to love you true You’ll look for a sunshine face that’s left your sight without a trace and all alone you’ll truly be no one will come, not even me For being scorned has hurt too long there’s a limit to remaining strong you will find it’s way too late to find me clinging to the garden gate. So if you fancy me at all better hang your hoe on the old barn wall swallow your pride, your big ego and let my lovin’ charm your soul. © June 20, 2000 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
VAS, Excellent write, enjoyed. |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
Vas.. running in the same vein, we truly are...how beautifully written...the thoughts themselves I would have claimed for mine alone... |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Just another one of your great writings Virginia. Bravo! A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Excellent and innovative. Is there something, perhaps to be said of Dandelion wine? Just a thought. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Oh well ((sigh)) that's another beauty Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Very clever write, VAS. All writing comes |
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