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Backlighting
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Backlighting |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Backlighting The back of the storm circles the edge multi-strange-colors at nine dusk comes in and out, quicksilvering slim lightening threads off and out there giant rumbles trembling slowly this way, a backwash of what could have been yellowing golds backlighting the underside of cottonwood’s leaves grays on grey’s white yellow tinged pink accumulations of formations all is a strange other world and I stand golden in its haze azaleas and camellias come to mind another yard, a different state a planting of promises that were seen only once we had dug deep in the postage stamp yard to put fragrance of rose and color of gladiola into being thin young trees planted for someday’s voluptuous shade memories now as backlit as the back of the storm circling the edge allows |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ This is really well done ... I sense the storm's edge folding in on memories. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Well done enjoyed. *L* |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful concept and vivid imagery Karilea, very nicely done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
beautiful imagery, wonderful analogy |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Karilea, beautiful images. Loved it. "Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahhh, Sissy, the color of the sky, the leaves and the color tones of the memories, all so vivid, all so real..very well done...most gentle smile |
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