Open Poetry #14 |
Kaleidoscope Aria |
Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
~*~ Kaleidoscope Aria ~*~Flitter flutters titter, Above rousing green and lilac. Freckled with cheerful yellows, Blazing reds and glorious orange. While a jovial sun warmed breeze, Flirts with bustling wings, Whisking amongst the dew-kissed petals, From horizon to distant sea. ~*~ photo: ephoto.com, "Fragile Beauty" by Karen Talasco ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Love your flutter-by. Such a happy poem for this afternoon. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I can't spel it or sing it, but you shore wrote it Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well just how GREAT is this, anyway!...Tanfastic! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Now you must know that I LOVE it! Excellent phrasing and imagery! Take care, Melissa~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Thank you all for liking my nonsense today. I actually saw this exact picture right outside the window where my computer is. I have a lilac tree and this little flutterby was catching some rays right before my eyes, much like this one. The picture here is identical to what I saw from my side window actually. [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 05-20-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ Just lovely ~ My mother was of butterfly spirit ~ She often flits about the flowers on my lawn. Such beauty is meant to be shared ... thank you for doing so. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
beautiful composition, in its entirety |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Marge: Now where I to be a spirit, a butterfly might possibly be my choice, how beautiful she must be? VAS: Thank you so much for enjoying this. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
a lovely uplifting poem. "you are what you own in this land, you can be king and it all depends on the view and what you can see" Whipping boy |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Brian: I do like to "uplift" thank you. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
aha, i just came across this one of yours i must of missed an want to say it is very enjoyable,everything you write is so beautiful, i hope to have half your talent one day. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Watersign6: I have to tell you - I don't consider myself talented one bit in this crowd, but I sure am glad you like what I do! You made my day! |
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Martha Cowan Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 240Groves, Texas |
Sharon...I'm playing catchup today...don't know how I missed this beautiful and serene verse that just fills the heart and spirit with warmth...very, very lovely and uplifting. Hugs and smiles to you, ~*~dawn~*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh Martha you are too funny, the lilac that butterfly was sitting on has long gone! Better late than never, I love your visits, thanks. |
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