Metaphorical Tragic Love Story

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Open Poetry #14

Metaphorical Tragic Love Story

FireDancer123
Junior Member

since 2001-06-14

Posts 43
Virginia

0 posted 2001-06-16 10:55 PM

The deepest hate from the cruelest soul.
The sharpest pain I've ever known.
Metaphorical bloodshed at the sound of your name.
Two lives collide, never the same.
I loved you but you tore me down.
It was only noise when you came around.
A tragic story to be sure,
But at least you got what you deserved.

"If you've never stared off into the distance, then your life is a shame." - A.Duritz
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Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-06-16 10:57 PM

Ouch, I heard the pain oozing from this one all the way over here. Powerful words.

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Eye
Junior Member

since 2001-06-10

Posts 28
Outside Looking In

2 posted 2001-06-17 01:13 AM

Whoa, cathartic writing for sure. Glad you got that out. Strong, willfull writing.

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