Open Poetry #14 |
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Wings of Cherished Hope |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea ![]() |
![]() Wings of Cherished Hope by Michael Afraid to soar, so settled we In these tired lives that do not grow In fear we might upset the norm Unsure just where our lives may go We love to dream but do not act Upon a future that's not clear How dull to never chase a dream Cannot we even spare a year? If you should fail, it can be said You chanced to dream like men of old And set your sails on unknown shores Bow cutting waters dark and cold Stagnation, ugly, should not win When books you never sought to read Since childhood tv's been your friend I want in you to plant a seed Like Jack, I hope that you will climb And touch the stars before too late To learn of things that you knew not There isn't time for you to wait Please seek these dreams before they're gone And soar on wings of cherished hope Then write the words for your life's song With obstacles, I know you'll cope For sunsets border on the mind And new horizons still to see Though unexplored these waters are It's up to us that they will be So raise your sails and hurry on The day is waning, sun's near set And dress yourself in warm attire This journey's cold and often wet And when you reach the stars you seek Like firefly glitter in the night Just onward push and do not rest Until at last your dreams see light Proust- |
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Lady In White![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
I do not see the scene except through your words.... and they alone painted the picture.... Bravo! |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Lady In White, Thank you. I'm glad you liked this one. It's weird...I put a painting of mine along with this poem and it showed up perfectly. Then when I clicked on the poem again, there was no image. Hmmm...must talk with the image experts like Mysteria. ![]() Michael Proust- |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
this is fantastic...i am breathless...helen |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
We love to dream but do not act Upon a future that's not clear How dull to never chase a dream Cannot we even spare a year? yes, I agree...time together ..act on it...find that dream and hold onto it...make it real ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I enjoyed this read, dreams....we should always dare to dream. Kathleen Blake |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this, I understand. . .even without the picture. . . well done Michael. . . this is superb. . . words that we should all follow. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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elizabeth anne Member
since 2001-03-29
Posts 83 |
This is inspiring Michael! Very nice! Elizabeth Anne |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Michael--Inspirational words, my friend, and so true. I hope you can get the painting back. |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
For sunsets border on the mind And new horizons still to see" New Horizons indeed....excellent write michael... ![]() Lauren~ **** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Hi my buddy, your poem was awesome, now as to the graphic...well, you see the guys at Geocities, are pretty smart, and they have put a protection on their bandwidth, so you can not link to their servers. You can copy from there and it looks fine, and only minutes later, it vanishes. My only suggestion is to give it someone who has a homepage out of Geocities (Tripod), to temporarily store for you, and transfer in from there. I never use any graphics from Geocities (Tripod), as the simply disappear, sorry as I know it was the ship right? Darn it all anyway! Well...here is the link to your home page so they can see it as it is worth the trip: http://members.tripod.com/~augustfire/index.html ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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angelbear Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 139North East, USA |
Hi. This was a wonderful poem. I especially like If you should fail, it can be said You chanced to dream like men of old And set your sails on unknown shores Bow cutting waters dark and cold What a true to life and prolific thought. Until you are are near it, you will never see it, until you live it you will never know it...this is why we must not judge it. |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Helen, I love your replies. They always give me a smile. Thank you. Wynter, Yes, make it real. Think of all the many years our lives contain. What do we do with them? So many of us sit in front of the television and live other people's lives. Such a shame. Thank you. Kathleen, Thank you for reading and the nice words. Sven, I guess I'll have to find a better way to display a picture next time. Oh well... Thank you for reading and liking this piece. Elizabeth Anne, Thank you, my friend Martie, I have to admit, it bugs me that my painting didn't show up, but that's the breaks. :-) Thank you Lauren, There are always new horizons, my friend. We've only to believe that they exist. Thank you. Sharon, The painting is at Tripod and they don't allow a remote server. I'll have to try elsewhere next time. Thank you for your help and for the "awesome" :-) angelbear, Welcome to Passions. You are going to like it here, I assure you. I'll be looking for your poetry and I thank you for reading mine. Thank you, everyone! ![]() Michael Proust- |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
superb Auguste....really a fabulous journey, Charisma |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
wonderful poem,also i just visited your site an read a few of your poems there an they are all so incredible,i will be reading more of yours at your site an here as well,your very gifted an reading your poems is so inspiring ![]() |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Auguste...James |
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