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| Open Poetry #14 |
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One Love |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Emerge from shadows where hidden from me has been the secret doors to our past Open now let me into a heart craved more than life your arms, my only home your kiss, the sweet nectar that sustains me Awaken from the trance of apathy light torches, lead the way I beg you, my lord, let me find you, now before death steals away remaining embers of a love once flourishing as eden itself In your cool paths, I have walked away from the scorching heat of loneliness I'd found sheer joy in the amber lights dancing in your eyes whenever you gazed upon me Every beautiful thing on God's good earth became more radiant, more colorful because of you stars faded in comparison for you loved me Beneath you, I'd found ecstacy the rythm of life pounding hard in forceful beats, our hearts raging to become one lost in passion's fervor every night an adventure, every day a present to be opened, relished, & treasured forever in your beautiful garden of refreshment, I'd returned to my youth, growing healthy, strong happiness was our butterfly roaming free... When my soul became filled with your future, you marveled at the soft kiss of roses upon my cheeks, the long luxurious length of my hair, the soft joy in my eyes you cradled me in your arms, ready to fulfill my every whim for I had become as swollen fruit giving off heady scents of the future was there anyone more protected than I? anyone more safe? secure? never! until now... The waters have dried, my lord there is no shade shielding me from the scorching heat of loneliness the land is barren, parched & my feet burn as I make my way over this no man's land you appear here & there, a mirage a fortress with no key tell me, what has happened to us? Allow me access to your heart, my lord, for I am the true half place in my hands, the golden keys of your trust, love, & commitment take mine, so that we might finally be freed from barren's jail let us again become one but hurry, my lord, hurry! or we shall surely die... ~Tier{R.T.} 6/99 |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tiersdin~ Goodness ... ! How lovely is this longing. Your writing is so softly haunting ... greatly enjoyed by this lady. 'stars faded in comparison for you loved me' *Sighhhhhhh* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Goodness, I wish I had read this, for I would have never posted mine...at least not today.... this shall stay at the top.... for all to see! |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Margie, and Sunshine, *hugs* thank you both your comments though I don't feel that I deserve them. love you both! ~Tier |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
WOW!!!, Tier, that was marvelous, and loved the changing patterns of your words..VERY good write...gentle smile |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Logan, I appreciate your kind comment! *hugs* ~Tier |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Tier, once again, you amaze me with the depth and honesty of your writing. . . this is really excellent. . . I loved the changes and the shifts of mood and motion. . . there was love, passion, desire, loss. . . all in one poem. . . well-crafted and well written my friend. . .  -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Awwww... Sven, you are such a sweetie! *hugs* Thank you so much! ~Tier |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
the flow in this is amazing, I was right there with you through all of the colors! "This rose has seen red, I have been blue |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
You write with much power and conviction here, Tier. Excellent work! All writing comes |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Gonna nudge this back up front for the ones that missed this wonderful read...gentle smile |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
glad they brought this to the top..beautiful writing, T... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Ah my dear lady.. how you do weave the words... always such real and convincing emotions... you are the master of romance and.... of loss... Been too long since I read your words on a regualr basis... hope to see more of them.. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
A truly wonderful work. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Very haunting.... Love It!!!! Thank You Connie |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is a marvelous write... great flow... regards, sudhir "I was born intelligent - education ruined me" |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you so much, Irish Rose, and Lone Wolf! *smiles* ~Tier |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you so much, Logan, Nakdthoughts, Captain, Interloper, and Sudhir. I appreciate both your comments and YOU! :-) *smiles* ~Tier [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 06-19-2001).] |
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