Open Poetry #14 |
Marry Me at Midnight |
Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Marry Me at Midnight I will meet you at 11:59 one moment short of yesterday one moment to forever in time beneath the stars in light of moon by cool of night come then, soon greet me ‘neath the bower bring with you one white flower for pure, this love quite sure, this love cathedral bell will ring the hour high from it’s escarped tower by sixth chime call me “mine” by twelfth bong to you, I belong as the day of yester meets the morn of new we marry then at midnight and start the day in true [This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 06-16-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oh Lady.....oh my oh my.... (iwihwt) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyInWhite~ Elegance of voice from the heart~ 'as the day of yester meets the morn of new we marry then at midnight and start the day in true' Reaching such lovely heights in your writing ... gives me many reads of pleasure. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Gee...do we have a romantic here? I like! Michael Proust- |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
So beautiful with such an eloquent, graceful style~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ahhhh, I sighed, did you? Lovely. ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~ |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
one moment short of yesterday one moment to forever in time ------------------- God......I loved this....... So beautifully expressed so romantically eloquant *sigh* Thank you ........ ************************** It's only me.......only me I hope that would suffice eternally {{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}} [This message has been edited by MyEnchanted_Melody (edited 06-16-2001).] |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lady in white--Lovely writing. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I loved each and every word!! All writing comes |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed this...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well now, this is very romantic and delightful! The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Great One here with this, Lady. A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
...hopelessly romantic... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
one minute to twelve just short of our tomorrow we two forever |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
Nothing shines as beautifully as love, which is so well displayed here. |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Very Excellent ........I will come...hopefully.....lolo I love to nice poetry. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How beautiful! *S* |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Goodness....thanks to everyone who came in to read this....there's quite a list of talents here....I am graced and blessed by all of you.... |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Lady, So enchanting! So tell me, where do I find this Prince that will show up at 11:59? Elise |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady...I seem to have missed this before..so glad to see it now..It's wonderful!! |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
lady in white, this is very spiritual and beautiful |
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