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Night of the Threshold
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Night of the Threshold |
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Eye Junior Member
since 2001-06-10
Posts 28Outside Looking In |
I hear you I feel you eyes mist in reach I hold you Threshold there I see through your eyes feel the tears roll down my own cheeks I hear you I feel you all dreams awaiting love I surround you The precipice calls words made gold by one Years we are here struggling for strength I hear you I feel you my eyes awash fears I trust you Night so long road stumbled regained grasped time has indeed told the tale I hear you I feel you It can never again be denied I love you Leap and I will catch you Fall and I will lift you Reach I will embrace you Release we become one forever our bond Upon this the night of the threshold [This message has been edited by Eye (edited 06-16-2001).] |
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FoxXena Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 141where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted |
Welcome to Passions! This is brilliant! I really hope to see more like this!    *+*Would you be known by everybody? Then you know nobody.~ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Wonderful entrance piece. Welcome to Passions! |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Critical mass has been achieved...make the most of it. You are poetically gifted, as always. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very cool poem...unique perspective. Welcome to Poetry Land nice to have you here. take care jm she said I dont know why you ever would lie to me |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome, Eye, to Passions! Please, check your e-mail for a special greeting! Karilea |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Welsome, nice beginning! And thanks for responding to my work, also. I like this, speaking of love found. Happy endings are well worth the pain to get there. Sandra |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
nice piece, welcome to passions. May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I really enjoyed reading this! excellent! *W*E*L*C*O*M*E* To Passions! *smiles* ~Tier |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family. I enjoyed this and will look for more from you.  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eye~ Welcome to Passions. We always welcome another's visions. Wonderfully done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome to Passions, enjoyed the read. "This rose has seen red, I have been blue |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Welcome! That line was especially a grabber! |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Nice poem!  WELCOMETO PASSIONS |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
An interesting read Eye Welcome! Maree |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Hope to see more of you, welcome in this family of friends. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
OH yes...welcome...again. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Welcome to Passions! This is a great poem with a great title.....I love the ending! The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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