Open Poetry #14 |
we dont have to... |
dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
you dont have to fall in love with me for me to love you for who i know you to be. we dont have to untuck my bed sheets for you to lay your head upon my pillow... i want to see your smile one day outside my open door, i want to put my hands upon your face, to still feel you near when i open my eyes. i'd love to hear your voice, right next to me in the moonlight-- and will you let me hold your hand before the whisper of early morn... we dont have to fall in love-- but what if we did... -dgvarner 6-14-01 |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Dg~ this is softly spoken from the heart....I love this very well done |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
ah yes, what if you did! "This rose has seen red, I have been blue |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
SEA..thank you kind friend! i dont consider this a masterpiece by poetic means..but its a little bit of my heart anyway.. thanks for always offering your reply IRISH..and thank you too good to see familiar 'faces' on the occasion that i get to visit 'home'.. hugs, g |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg...old friend.. it seems i always pop in just in time to read these little pieces of your heart that you choose to share. i'm really glad i caught this one. loving this and missing you... love ya bunches, vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Jade New Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 9Emerald City |
Ahhhhhhhhh, what an ending! Bravo! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Hi sweets, This is such a sweet and beautiful whisper. There are so many what if in life, and none said more sweetly then this.. Parker |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This is exceptionally soft... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
TRICKS! my long lost friend..you gotta quit gettin lost....! always i smile when you come back around thanks for sharing my little heart bits..lol JADE..thank you PARKER, love..thank you yes, on the what-ifs just never can tell...btw, i whisper better in person... LADY IN WHITE..i thank you hugs, g no i wont be afraid. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
So do I, and we don't need to untuck any sheets... Parker |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Very lovingly depicted, so gentle and wanting... innocently. Very nice. Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~Smiling, enjoyed it, g ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
PARKER.. THUNDER..you read me very well.. thank you WYNTER..glad you enjoyed..thanks for reading VANDANA..thanks hugs, g |
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