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FireDancer123 Junior Member
since 2001-06-14
Posts 43Virginia |
I shiver when there is no wind. I have to work at keeping myself from falling apart. There are worlds weeping inside my head, And their songs echo like my failing heart. Distant thunder. Dancing feet. I am swept under the ground that was supposed to support me. "If you've never stared off into the distance, then your life is a shame." - Adam Duritz |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
"I shiver when there is no wind. ............ ..... ....... ..... I am swept under the ground that was supposed to support me." ********************** I loved the whole poem..........touching and so true....... and found myself within two lines alot....They seem to say so much. Thank you for sharing this...... ************************************ It's only me.......only me |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Wow! Fantastic writing!  |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
I do understand this feeling, FireDancer...but very nice expression of these emotions...I liked it... sp  I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Firedancer, everything about this likes me....thank you! |
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