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Destiny Nicole
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since 2001-04-04
Posts 19
USA

0 posted 2001-06-15 02:39 PM


I Love You, Tyler


I remember the day I found out
and what your father said.
My mother wasn’t sure
about the plans I’d made.

I watched you
come into this world.
I watched when at four months,
you almost died.

I remember when at two,
you came to me,
“I want to help, Mama”

I taught you how to cook
and clean up your toys.

I told you to behave
and to listen to grownups.

Now, almost five,
you say you love me
and miss be a bunch.

Please be good for daddy
and learn lots in school.
I still have so much to teach you
and am sure you can teach me, too.

I’ll never hurt you intentionally.
Be nice and always listen
to grownups.
I love you, my son,
and always will.


© Copyright 2001 Destiny Nicole - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2001-06-15 03:26 PM


heart breaker here....

nicely penned...

Nathaniel Shain
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since 2001-06-03
Posts 35

2 posted 2001-06-15 05:39 PM


Destiny,

This is such a tender and sad poem.  There's nothing like the love of a mother for her children.  I love the "realness" of this poem.  Well done!

Nathaniel

elizabeth anne
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since 2001-03-29
Posts 83

3 posted 2001-06-15 09:03 PM


Made me cry... very sweet.

Elizabeth Anne

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
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4 posted 2001-06-15 09:30 PM


That's a very nice motherlove poem.

Titia

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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida
5 posted 2001-06-15 09:50 PM


Kids always give us pure love. Enjoyed very much, thanks for sharing!
Destiny Nicole
Junior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 19
USA
6 posted 2001-06-17 11:16 PM


Thank you all, Most of the time people take for granted the things that are just given to them.  I believe it is very important to thank god every day for everything that we have.  If not for him where would we be.  
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