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Sway Of The Wind
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Sway Of The Wind |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite: Sway of the Wind Seeds of change within persist As winds of nature dance in twist. Play in space and base in grace, Root their time in full embrace. Without arms it does the deed, Weighs and drops the carried seed. Within a paradox of blend, Where sinks the roots until its end. Wind, the artist of the core, Paints the canvas green with awe. Beyond imaginations ken, Creating, primal Edens den. The garden of the apple seed The garden of our Adams deed The garden where the wind has sown, The garden that the wind has blown. It's here we pray confession, Amongst the winds discretion? |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ohhhh Seymour....  I like this very much |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This literally dances...and what a partner, "Thought".... what a dance, indeed.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, Thank you sweet. Sunshine, Thank you my ever faithful one. *L* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Wind, the artist of the core, Paints the canvas green with awe. Beyond imaginations ken, Creating, primal Edens den. The garden of the apple seed The garden of our Adams deed The garden where the wind has sown, The garden that the wind has blown. It's here we pray confession, Amongst the winds discretion? ==================================== your poetic winds ching me chimes and your rhymes ring me bells *ww*   me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, And you are my Tinker Bell. I knew it was you that brought this back from the grave. So now I am your slave. Winkiewinkie Stinky |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ The entire piece is captivating - but this is ...... stunning~ 'Without arms it does the deed, Weighs and drops the carried seed. Within a paradox of blend, Where sinks the roots until its end.' How eloquent, dear poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful Seymour .. you carry such a wonderful rhythm throughout this lovely piece, very much enjoyed as always! Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 06-15-2001).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, An eloquent comment from an eloquent lady. *L* Kit, I thank you twice. LOL |
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