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Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-06-14 03:59 PM

~*~

simply simmering
seemingly straightforward sighs
sensuously sweet

~*~

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

1 posted 2001-06-14 04:01 PM

i aint gonna touch this.....yet

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-06-14 04:45 PM

Hmmm. perhaps I should side with Walt on this one..

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

3 posted 2001-06-14 04:53 PM

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

cruz
Member

since 2000-07-18

Posts 282
Dallas,Texas USA

4 posted 2001-06-14 04:58 PM

eyes are closed, head tilted back, and all five senses are activated with this one. id love to know your subject of inspiration. what an awesome trance.

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

5 posted 2001-06-14 05:01 PM

wow....simply sensuous......

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2001-06-14 06:15 PM

sensuous spooning
starts spirited sensor spree
see spoliation

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

7 posted 2001-06-14 09:24 PM

Great job...wonderfully done..

~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

8 posted 2001-06-14 09:41 PM

Excellent alliteration senryu...Well done

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

9 posted 2001-06-14 09:52 PM

I'm not touchig this one either, you put the words together so well. Wonderful write. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Red_Feather
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since 2001-01-19

Posts 131
The Vagabond Sea

10 posted 2001-06-14 10:08 PM

i love the Sound of this one.

One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

11 posted 2001-06-14 10:09 PM

They sure do!!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

12 posted 2001-06-14 10:09 PM

Ooooh I really like this, excellent use of alliteration and sensuality

Take care,
Melissa~

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