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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2001-06-14 02:51 PM


Seldom are wordS
Enough, when wE
Look into the welL
Draining our demanD
Or emotional libidO,
Making them a shaM
Argument or a galA,
Resplendent with otheR
Examples we sharE,
While waiting for neW
Orchestrations tO
Resound in ouR
Deeply hidden iD,
Showing uS
Everything wE
Never felt iN
Our efforts tO
Unite or bid adieU,
Garrulously we huG,
Hoping to feel enougH

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-06-14 03:00 PM

Well, I'm impressed....
nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2001-06-14 03:01 PM

awwwww  very nice...

M

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...Pope John Paul II



jellybeans
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3 posted 2001-06-14 03:10 PM

lolol ok, I knew you were good.....now you are showing off......
j/k...I have only tried one acrostic, and ended up scrapping it......and a double acrostic...gotta say I am impressed...
Interloper
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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2001-06-14 05:55 PM

Well done ... but why would someone want to hide their ID?  They would need it if stopped by the police, wouldn't they


Poeminister
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5 posted 2001-06-14 10:22 PM

Cpat Hair
True indeed, my friend.  Excellent acrosticizing.
Titia Geertman
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6 posted 2001-06-14 10:30 PM

And double it is too  

LOVELY!!!

Titia

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7 posted 2001-06-15 12:47 PM

My! Is there no end to your talent?  Excellent!

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2dalimit
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8 posted 2001-06-15 08:19 AM

Words a plenty and clever. well done.

Melton
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9 posted 2001-06-16 05:00 PM

to second Sunshine, I'm impressed too!!  I can barely do a single acrostic much less a double!!  

great job. . .

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Tiersdin
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10 posted 2001-06-16 06:03 PM

I remember this one, Captain, good to read it again! *smiles*

~Tier
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