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IWithinYou
Junior Member

since 2001-06-14

Posts 21
Within You

0 posted 2001-06-14 12:06 PM

Sprinkled in powdered sugar
my words and touch are
chosen with care
leaving a light sweetness
to linger and be savored
That each delicately fed taste
shall always leave you craving
more

"Here, as in life, meaning is, I should say, often more fruitfully found in the question asked than in any answer given."
~Robert Penn Warren~

© Copyright 2001 IWithinYou - All Rights Reserved

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

1 posted 2001-06-14 12:22 PM

How well this likes me....I recall taking paper lace doilies, putting them over the cake, sprinkling lightly with powdered sugar, leaving behind delicate tracings...

ah yes, this likes me very much!

Cpat Hair

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Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-06-14 12:24 PM

Ah to always leave them wanting more...

Granny used to tell me you caught more flies with honey than vinegar...( never did know why you would want to catch flies anyway but I digress)

Enjoyed the read...

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2001-06-14 12:40 PM

excellent!!! Now to this I can REALLY relate!!

autumn
Junior Member

since 2001-06-08

Posts 44
Maine

4 posted 2001-06-14 01:51 PM

Really enjoyed. If all could be sweet and kind it would be a wonderful world.

cruz
Member

since 2000-07-18

Posts 282
Dallas,Texas USA

5 posted 2001-06-14 05:21 PM

short, sweet and pretty neat. well done.

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

6 posted 2001-06-14 05:46 PM

Well said, beautiful poem.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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Love
Junior Member

since 2001-06-04

Posts 15
All Places Always

7 posted 2001-06-14 07:57 PM

This speaks in spice
as much as sugar
for what is one without
the other

A very delectable read.

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

8 posted 2001-06-14 08:59 PM

Very nice write...I truly enjoyed the imagery...great work...

sp

I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why
Everything gotta change around me
I’d tell it to your face,
But you lost your face along the way...

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2001-06-14 09:05 PM

I loved this one. So sweet!!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Eye
Junior Member

since 2001-06-10

Posts 28
Outside Looking In

10 posted 2001-06-15 10:29 PM

This is indeed a light, airy and very delicately sweet read.

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

11 posted 2001-06-16 01:20 AM

Beautiful, and deftly penned. Well done.

PM

"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato

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