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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Breathless Alone… Thoughts of you, Caged in an empty heart, Chase themselves In eternal circles. Longing… To escape their spiral, I sleep. But dreams are not always flowers and forever, Some… Leave you sucking for air As you drown In fiery… cold drops of doubt, diluting confidence with fear Alone… Thoughts of you, Leave me Breathless. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Oh....wow....and speechless.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat Hair, I'd say you got it bad. Nice write enjoyed. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Lady... my lack of skill often leave people that way. ( grinning) Seymour... Not really..much of what I have written comes from other peoples comments or just my take on their emotions.. glad you enjoyed the read.. Thanks to you both! |
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