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Our Trip |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind 
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Our Trip just the two of us on the road alone four wheels humming their tune on the pavement throughout the night dark roads dark highways even cities sleeping no visual movement only us as we pass while all are at rest heading to see wanting to learn hoping to find the Past within the Present. A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. Bernie Slicker this was the thoughts i had while driving from south florida to the north east side of mississippi in the middle of the night, on the way to see where my wife was born and some history of her family. [This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 06-14-2001).] |
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g-hm Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 85 |
Good write Bernie! |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
Sounds like it was a good trip. Nice job. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Again you managed to convey the feeling by painting the atmosphere...this one read with the same lulling affect of a car's motion...always something comforting in that. Enjoyed much Bernie!!! |
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