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Emotional Cinquains
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Emotional Cinquains |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Emotions Moisture dripping, salty to the taste, heated, fueled by wandering thoughts, tomorrow's current. Questions gathering drops, anxiety easing the doubts of concern, relieving the fear. Answers seen face to face responding, depth in eyes speaking silently, as only truth can. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"Answers seen face to face responding, depth in eyes speaking silently, as only truth can." That's a powerful verse.....good poem Wynter! The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
why thank you Me. E..of course you like truth..*s ~Smiles M/Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Nakd--I like these all. Wonderful Cinquains. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
don't you just love form, when all else fails..I turn to it..*s thank you ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Questions gathering drops, anxiety easing the doubts of concern, relieving the fear. Interesting lines here... enjoyed them all..... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hey C...I was just on my third floor sweating to death..those moisture drops soaked me but good..came down to cool off a bit and think about the tomorrows...see..anything can spark me to write..and most times it has nothing to do with the cause. ~Smiling..whoops forgot to thank you *s M "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 06-13-2001).] |
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