Open Poetry #14 |
Their Blood Flows Through Me |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Their Blood Flows Through Me before me are my ancestors laying in their eternal beds there is my beautiful mother thirty eight years old my father sleeps here too every where I look, I see my family standing here I am the daughter of my father baby of my mother woman of my own story flowing through my veins is the blood of these before me the blood of nobles, professionals, a minister, farmers, a horse thief or two, rebels, a murderer who killed his best friend in a three way lovers quarrel I realize suddenly I can barely breathe my heart starts beating in my temples knowing their blood flows through me they are all part of me, but am I part of them one day many years from now someone will stand at the foot of my bed and I wonder, if like me now, will their hearts skip a beat and wonder about me "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 06-14-2001).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
It's always so very interesting to look back at the old family tree and wonder about those relatives and what they were really like. I liked your muse of this...very good! The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
The questions of a journey back in time...profoundly related! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
As with all passings or changes..we wonder what our legacy will be... Still as I sit and watch in tumbling despair the change of beauty's grace I must in stumbling hopeful ways arrange the images erased into memories of this small passing as I stilly sit with tears amassing |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You can bet on it! Well done! |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
A powerful story, very well told. Great job. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
1 slick_lady, I wish I could remember all I have ever heard and read about my family. I can't get enough of "olden days" stories. I hope you have all of this written down for the next generations. You did a beautiful job on all the pictures you painted for our minds. ME |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This brings back a recollection of my grandmother, [who was always YOUNG at heart] who said, "don't look too far into your ancestors, as there was a pirate or two..." Yes....it DOES take all kind to make You and me I enjoyed this! Thank you! |
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