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Open Poetry #14

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Mark
Junior Member

since 2001-06-13

Posts 18

0 posted 2001-06-13 12:45 PM

The softness of
a woman's curves
in graceful reach
captures my appriciation
as coffee sipped
slides down richly
complimented by her laughter
delicate and free
she's unaware of me
at my desk here
amazed at the way her beauty
touches me

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2001-06-13 12:48 PM

Ah, coffee mates.....I enjoyed this!

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-06-13 12:55 PM

yes...quiet admiration from afar...
well done poet sir...
great imagery here...simple and to the point.

she said I dont know why you ever would lie to me
like I'm a little untrusting when I think that the truth is gonna hurt ya
~MB20~

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-06-13 01:29 PM

Nicely done... admiring and enjoying with still a hint of regret...

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2001-06-13 10:15 PM

Liking this as well. Very easy to see the scenario.
Sandra

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2001-06-13 11:52 PM

Mark--In just a few words you tell us the inner and outer scene..and you do it well.

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