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Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

0 posted 2001-06-13 07:38 AM

I could be completely wrong
For I've been wrong before
Like when I jumped to the conclusion
That you were walking out my door

And the time that I believed
You were having an affair
For when I rang your office
You were never there

I could be completely wrong
It's possible I know
I could believe you care for me
Although you never show

And what about the nighttime
Could it ever be the same?
When embraced by passion
You called someone else's name

I could be completely wrong
That you like me anyway
With all your indiscretions
Why do you choose to stay?

I sit here in the darkness
A jealous seething heart
I wait for you, to return
And your tales to start

I plot my plan of vengeance
Where blood flows free and strong
I think that I could walk away
But I could be completely wrong.

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

1 posted 2001-06-13 08:07 AM

I do hope that you are completely wrong, and that this all is fictive.
Enjoyed the write. Excellent as always my dear friend.

(((hugs)))
Charisma

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2001-06-13 08:17 AM

Loved this Kethry.. how often I think I could be wrong...only instinct is usually right... *s nice to see your words

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-06-13 08:18 AM

If one is to be wrong.... it is best to be wrong about giving love a chance..rather than not..

enjoyed the poem

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

4 posted 2001-06-13 09:56 AM

This kind of self doubt follows so closely an intense knowledge of self...sometimes it is hard to tell the difference. Appreciated much!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2001-06-13 10:15 AM

Kethry,
Enjoyed the poem, can't answer the question.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-06-13 07:40 PM

only the heart knows for sure my friend. . .

there's a lot of self-doubt and questioning here, I know that you'll find the answers that you seek. . . just keep writing it out and searching for it. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

7 posted 2001-06-14 03:58 AM

Thanks folks, let me firstly say this is completely fictional. It is part of a Trilogy I wrote when I asked the question "What if?"
thanks again, I hope to back amongst friends soon. For good this time.
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

8 posted 2001-06-14 12:16 PM

This IS wonderfully written, O Kethry...

Regards m'friend,
Sudhir

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