Open Poetry #14 |
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Cherry Cola Ville (Thank you Coka Calo and Jimmy Buffet!) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) ![]() |
I flounder In your mysteries I wither In possibilities I’m wasting away again In cherry colaville Searchin for my lost shaker of Walt I like pina coladas I like toast and jam But neither of these admissions Let you know just who I am I, my love Am like a taxidermist I just gotta get under your skin You my love Are like a pachyderm pissed You can stomp till I’m very thin SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT THERE’S A WOOOOOMAN TO BLAME AND I KNOW They sure is right! SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT THERE’S A MAN THEY CAN BLAME AND I KNOW That’s the husband’s plight See you again next time In cherry cola ville I’m sure I’ll be stooped over and bent You see I tried to argue with my wife When “Yes Maam! Yes Maam!” Is what I meant I love my wife AND I ALWAYS WILL Sometimes I think too much About cherry cola ville Searchin for my lost shaker of Walt Some people say that I haven’t a name And I know…it’s my own damn fault |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I think your shaker of Walt has been left out in the rain! (oh, that's ANOTHER song!).. cute Walt. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Well, I love Jimmy Buffett...and this lived up to my expectaions. Bravo! Well done! I'll pass the walt if I find it. |
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sans38 Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 117Westland, Michigan |
This put a big smile on my face....very cute! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Totally enjoyed...the rhythm was fun the words a gas, if I find Walt, I'll let him pass. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You are jsut tooooooooo much lol....and hey....I like the new pic |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
walt you are way out alright but thats what makes your poems so unique and kool ![]() |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
maan, this is crazyfunnycool. i feel for those who underestimate you. you assemble words rather nicely. |
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