Open Poetry #14 |
One More Day |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
One More Day I so tire of never mores and the sound of slamming doors today I wish for just one day one more day of kissing sweet lips caressing under finger tips a long slow dance a never ending romance one more tear to cry another time to hold head high someone I’ve lost to again call friend a better way to learn to mend to hold another nearer to me the knowledge to let go, and let things be and find tomorrow with a smile and remember in loss, all is worthwhile "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
All good points. I especially like... and find tomorrow with a smile... Melton |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
i must say that I loved this one, very sad yet hopeful, from a realist's point of view with a lighter optimistic side too...I can say that I grew tired of the whole thing long ago and have the same wish, but if it doesn't come true, then it doesn't. Thanks for this one. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Your usual...excellent work.. always a pleasure to read... |
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