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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2001-06-12 09:01 PM



Do you remember
the way our souls
kissed when we met?
It was magic!
love at first sight!
& when we'd touched~
E*L*E*C*T*R*I*C!
Even now the sparkle
remains in my eyes
from the first day
of the rest of our
lives~ all those
years ago...
let's do it all over,
let's kiss with
our souls tonight
and fall in love again
& again, & again, & again...


~Tier
6/01



© Copyright 2001 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-12 09:03 PM


ummmmmmmmmm....yes...... this is wonderful!!  
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2 posted 2001-06-12 09:04 PM


Charming? Oh Yes!
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3 posted 2001-06-12 09:19 PM


This is just the cutest write, Tier...I truly love it!

sp  

I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why
Everything gotta change around me
I’d tell it to your face,
But you lost your face along the way...

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4 posted 2001-06-13 07:49 PM


there's nothing like that first moment Tier. . . unless there's a second moment, and a third. . . and so on. . . LOL

love this one. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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5 posted 2001-06-13 08:29 PM


and tis to last forever and a day, and for some of us who think that way, on other planes far away, where you meet again..lovely read, Tier, thank you...gentle smile
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6 posted 2001-06-13 08:31 PM


Where do I sign up for this experience?  
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7 posted 2001-06-13 08:47 PM


very nicely said!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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8 posted 2001-06-13 09:31 PM


beautiful write and i loved reading it  
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9 posted 2001-06-13 10:16 PM


Oh yes, indeed!   My compliments, Tiersdin.
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10 posted 2001-06-14 02:04 AM


Once again tonight...many cheers to agains!
Kethry
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11 posted 2001-06-15 12:56 PM


Tiers,
A kiss is just a kiss, but  when you put it like that...I think not. *soft smile*
Keth

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life.  Patty Hansen.



Tiersdin
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12 posted 2001-06-15 11:42 AM


Thank you all for your wonderful comments! Oh, the smiles you've given me!

*hugs*

~Tier

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13 posted 2001-06-17 12:43 PM


lovely...this brought me an urgency to search for my true love...

ohh, how i wish to be able to feel like that some day....

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